Comments on Schmutzie's Schmoetry: Unmoored

wow.

2009-05-01T21:03:00.000-06:00

wow.

Preparing for surgery can be a big undertaking. As...

2009-01-09T00:19:00.000-06:00

Preparing for surgery can be a big undertaking. As part of your preparation don't forget to get all your questions answered before the surgery.
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Angelinjones
Acne Scar Removal News & Discussion

Sometimes it's too much to handle feelings like th...

2008-11-12T06:02:00.000-06:00

Sometimes it's too much to handle feelings like that without a toe in first. I appreciated the warmup. Beautiful work, thanks.

Unsolicited advice: :)

I would get rid of t...

2008-10-06T08:32:00.000-06:00

Unsolicited advice: :)

I would get rid of the first stanza. It feels like a warm up stanza and doesn't compare to the power of the next three. I like the ending, the mundanity of it.

I love it when you do this.

2008-10-03T23:59:00.000-06:00

I love it when you do this.

That left me breathless.

2008-10-03T19:46:00.000-06:00

That left me breathless.

Comments on Schmutzie's Schmoetry: Unmoored

wow.

Preparing for surgery can be a big undertaking. As...

Sometimes it's too much to handle feelings like th...

Unsolicited advice: :)I would get rid of t...

I love it when you do this.

That left me breathless.

Unsolicited advice: :)

I would get rid of t...