tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16730740.post3933314130959853408..comments2007-05-11T08:07:10.791-06:00Schmutziehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03023867307505601913schmutzie@gmail.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16730740.post-28084038131479379832007-05-11T08:07:10.791-06:002007-05-11T08:07:10.791-06:00you've captured it well there.Crafty Green Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16730740.post-60294277709081465132007-04-28T00:07:21.616-06:002007-04-28T00:07:21.616-06:00I've read this whole site. I hope you're collecting these poems for a book.<BR/><BR/>Damn you, though, for making it look so easy to produce brilliant work, in the tradition of the Beats whom I so admire.SquareTravelerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04744444321242833934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16730740.post-56400183959035819352007-04-27T08:43:04.772-06:002007-04-27T08:43:04.772-06:00The last stanza is the clincher..gautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16730740.post-19602265710588800072007-04-26T18:34:28.318-06:002007-04-26T18:34:28.318-06:00I lack of engagement or agency created by the expletive of line 7 is marvelous.debhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07751988526624168263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16730740.post-68017480497593783862007-04-26T18:09:35.047-06:002007-04-26T18:09:35.047-06:00Liking this one. Disillusion you can cut with a knife.Mr. Headhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16581163190899468087noreply@blogger.com