tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16730740.post4618947198373673453..comments2007-05-24T20:32:41.327-06:00Comments on Schmutzie's Schmoetry: Remember: I Am Two ThingsSchmutziehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03023867307505601913schmutzie@gmail.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16730740.post-68215698196702128792007-05-24T20:32:41.327-06:002007-05-24T20:32:41.327-06:00Good stuff.Good stuff.Davehttp://www.vianegativa.usnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16730740.post-77063436734955832032007-05-24T16:39:06.491-06:002007-05-24T16:39:06.491-06:00What gorgeous pathos: the foreshadowing of grief a...What gorgeous pathos: the foreshadowing of grief and loss, the tenderness... wow.chicklegirlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03000215636803243874noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16730740.post-3875461076094325422007-05-24T15:37:11.013-06:002007-05-24T15:37:11.013-06:00I am speechless. What a moving poem.I am speechless. What a moving poem.Bethhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15407948217677679489noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16730740.post-23674503963908126892007-05-24T15:09:48.572-06:002007-05-24T15:09:48.572-06:00Astoundingly beautiful and sensitive. The lines "...Astoundingly beautiful and sensitive. The lines "you see one thing that could leave you;/I see one thing that was never mine" -- are an important reminder.Clarehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11746014771712020963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16730740.post-43305738788256473952007-05-24T14:26:04.731-06:002007-05-24T14:26:04.731-06:00This is another fantastic piece of work, beautiful...This is another fantastic piece of work, beautifully written and very effective, as always. You know I'm a fan. I have to say, though, I think you're giving too much credit to the brain. Consciousness precedes, transcends and is never anchored by that highly overrated organ.SquareTravelerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04744444321242833934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16730740.post-55257615125393143072007-05-24T14:01:12.392-06:002007-05-24T14:01:12.392-06:00once drawn, nothing can really be erased. I found ...once drawn, nothing can really be erased. I found this poem very moving.wendyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14586814769281622578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16730740.post-2394261149639050952007-05-24T11:54:57.585-06:002007-05-24T11:54:57.585-06:00It is always interesting to see ourselves through ...It is always interesting to see ourselves through someone else's eyes and notice the difference between their perception and our own understanding of ourselves. This poem is so nuanced in its understanding of mortality and intimacy. I also read through some of your other poems and they were very powerful and moving!bookbindshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06116009455925925638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16730740.post-17239346429595625842007-05-23T10:26:44.776-06:002007-05-23T10:26:44.776-06:00...dammit. Why can't I come up with words to descr......dammit. Why can't I come up with words to describe how good this is? Makes a tight thumping in my throat. Never, ever stop writng.Mr. Headhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16581163190899468087noreply@blogger.com