tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16730740.post7409789584899855106..comments2007-08-24T04:27:20.828-06:00Schmutziehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03023867307505601913schmutzie@gmail.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16730740.post-58637340166055493882007-08-24T04:27:20.828-06:002007-08-24T04:27:20.828-06:00You never fail to astonish me. You're jaw-droppingly gifted.SquareTravelerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04744444321242833934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16730740.post-77245316425612639362007-08-03T08:50:54.323-06:002007-08-03T08:50:54.323-06:00I love your poetry, Schmutzie...<BR/>it always makes me think... and that's good.Regina Clare Janehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14287107184977896696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16730740.post-2460442319406231982007-08-02T21:41:13.496-06:002007-08-02T21:41:13.496-06:00I love the first line, it sets the mood, and the second line just dragged me along and plunged me headfirst into the rest of the poem. Nice!Constancehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17964121072645959593noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16730740.post-14994646106869697162007-08-02T18:44:10.728-06:002007-08-02T18:44:10.728-06:00Nice take on perspective.<BR/><BR/>I don't "get" the last line. But it doesn't matter--I like the words....debhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14744896385434246402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16730740.post-66252000541107405252007-08-02T14:15:09.629-06:002007-08-02T14:15:09.629-06:00Lots of depth in here - layers I love.tumblewordshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16730740.post-6549020036181497612007-08-02T12:23:39.547-06:002007-08-02T12:23:39.547-06:00A fine poem! I especially like the last three lines of the first stanza!pepektheassassinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13494251587598676788noreply@blogger.com